2022-2023高三英语（人教版）二轮复习专题训练专题十七 书面表达（有答案）考试试卷

专题十七 书面表达
一、
某英语报社现面向中学生征文,主题是分享帮助父母做家务的感受及收获。请你以The First Time I Shared Housework为题,写一篇短文。要点如下;
1.做家务的经历;
2.你的感受和收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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二、
假如你是李华，你的新西兰朋友George对你们学校的特色课程非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你参加的特色课程；
2.对这门课程的反响。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、
假定你是李华，正负责筹备学校年度英语诗歌创作大赛。你想去找外教Mariam咨询关于诗歌主题等相关的事情，但是发现Mariam不在办公室，请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.找她的原因；
2.约定见面的时间、地点。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mariam,
I'm Li Hua from your English poetry class.______________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1.音乐会特点；
2.观看感受；
3.意见建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic. ______________________________
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五、
假定你是李华，你校的校报英语栏目正在征稿，主题是对中国载人潜水器“奋斗者”号在太平洋马里亚纳海沟深潜10,909米，打破新纪录表示祝贺。请你写一篇祝贺稿，内容包括：
1. 背景介绍；
2. 肯定付出的努力；
3. 成功深潜的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：“奋斗者”号Striver 潜水器submersible 马里亚纳海沟Mariana Trench 太平洋the Pacific Ocean
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六、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot June day, and Sammy Armstrong couldn't wait to get in the water. The ten-year-old was on a camping trip at McKinney Falls State Park with his mom, Kelley, his dad, Stacey, and his brothers, Ben, eight, and Willy, two.
Around 11 a. m., Sammy's mother and little brother Ben dropped the boat into Onion Creek, a river travelling through the park's 750 acres, and went in for a short trip. Sammy and Willy accompanied their dad to Upper Falls, which marks the point where Onion Creek falls 12 feet over a rock ledge (岩架).At the top of the waterfall, a pathway made of white stones crosses the river bed. Below is a swimming hole, 20 feet deep in some places.
With his father watching from the rocks above, Sammy jumped in. He was a good swimmer — he'd been on the swim team in his hometown of Cypress, Texas. Sammy played in the water for a while, eventually pulling himself out and onto a large warm rock and watching a group of children walk through the river bed above. They were summer campers from Austin who were headed back to the visitors' parking lot after a morning hike. As the kids passed Stacey and Willy, a tiny five-year-old girl reached down to grab a water bottle and lost her balance. In an instant, she was swept over the falls.
"A girl went over the waterfall!" Stacey shouted. Sammy caught a glance of the girl's arm and the top of her dark head as the roiling currents pushed her into the low area beneath the rock ledge, hiding her from the crowd above. She struggled in the deep water. "I'm shocked and afraid at this point," Sammy says now. His father, with Willy under one arm, walked toward the edge of the waterfall to try to locate the girl, but Sammy was the one within striking distance. "You have to get her out of there!" Stacey yelled down to him.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:
The ten-year-old was nervous and took a few seconds to consider the situation.
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Paragraph 2:
Soon, someone came and pulled both kids away from the water. _______________
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七、阅读下面材料, 根据共内容和所给段落汗头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇究整的短文。
I was twenty then, teaching a class of thirty students in Toronto including Mike, a 10-year-old street kid. Having lost his father and mother, he lived with a mentally-disturbed grandmother.
He was always hungry, so each day I'd take him for breakfast before class. Each noon after I shared my lunch with him, I taught him new skills—using a microscope, constructing a camera etc.
One day Mike told me of his dream. Most kids in the class wanted to be doctors, teachers or some such thing, but not Mike! His desire was to be a gangster(强盗)!And he was serious about it.
I believed all children had a gift for what he wanted to be. If he wanted to be a gangster, I'd do all I could to help him become the very best “gangster” .
I had a plan. Every Saturday after we had breakfast, I took him to the Law Library of the city. I explained to him a good gangster had to know something about criminal law, and reading up on law was the only way to learn. His young mind was interested, and he dove in.
That was how we spent each Saturday morning that year. I'd drop him off at the law library. Three hours later, I'd return, pick him up for lunch and after a review of his morning's work, take him home.
The following year I taught in another school far away, which prevented me continuing to participate physically with him on Saturday mornings. But I provided him with public transportation tickets so he could keep up his regular study at the library.
Later I got married and moved to London. Sadly, and to my great regret, I lost contact with Mike.
Years passed. I often thought of him, wondering what had become of him. Then, one day, I was back in Toronto on business, looking up the number of a former colleague in the telephone directory, and there, Mike's name as part of a title of “JUDGES and LAWYERS” danced off the page into my eyes.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I wondered, “Could it be him ” _______________________________________
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When we were able to get together, he told me his road to the law. ___________
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八、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was driving home from school one hot summer day when I realized that my car was not working right, I kept driving and prayed that it would hold out the 3 hours that I still had to go. Seconds later, everything in my car died and I barely made it off to the shoulder.
Knowing absolutely nothing about cars, I pulled off to check the oil because that was the only thing I knew how to do. As I was doing this, an older man in a truck pulled behind me and asked if I needed help. Of course, I couldn't turn him down since I was so far from home. He could see that I was shaken up and told me to get back in the car and he would take a look to see what was wrong.
After some investigating, he informed me that it was my transmission(变速器) and he could jump my car enough to make it to the service station which was just a mile up the road. After charging my car, he led me to the station and went in to tell the mechanic what was wrong. He came back out seconds later to tell me the mechanic was out on a break and probably wouldn't be back. However, there was a shop with auto parts and he would see if they had the right part. He went ahead and purchased the transmission for me and said he could again jump my car enough to drive it up the road to his place where he had a shop where he worked on tractors.
I again followed him up the highway to his shop and he began working on my car while I sat in the driver's seat. After working for about an hour, trying to get the old transmission out and the new one in, he realized that he had gotten the wrong transmission and would go back into town and get the right one. While doing that, he sent me into the house where his wife had a little hair salon.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She offered me something to eat and drink while I waited. ____________________
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I wrote him a check for the transmission and tried to give him more. ____________
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九、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lora’s house stood on a wooded slope not far up from the river. On a sunny morning in July, she decided to take her three kids down to the river, Mikey aged 13, Paul 8 and Lisa 5. As a nature lover, she insisted they spend as much time as possible outdoors. “We are going to pick berries now,” she announced.
The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt trail through the trees. Stopping the children at the first berry bush, “Look, the berries are all over,” she said. Mikey broke into a run to the berries. Lora and the little ones hurried to keep up. She helped Lisa find some clusters(串；簇) on the lowest branches. Paul watched and then tasted a berry. “Mmm, good,” he said, and got busy picking more.
Lora and the children moved slowly from bush to bush. Within 20 minutes, the children had filled their jars and were almost at the river. “OK,” Lora commanded after the group climbed down to the sandbank, “Let’s play just right here.”
Lora rested herself not far from the children, listening to their laughing and playing. Suddenly, she sensed the children go quiet. She looked up to see the back of a big-sized cat standing over Lisa. It was a young cougar(美洲狮). The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately froze Lora. The three kids, rooted to the spot, were too nervous to say a word. She knew she must do something.
Paragraph 1：
The first idea that hit Lora was to attract the cougar’s attention away from her kids. ________________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
Just as Lora was struggling with the beast with almost her last strength, she saw the three kids running back, each holding a stick. _____________________________
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十、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was backpacking and planned to climb a volcano called Volcan Baru. At 3,474m, it is the highest peak in the country and one of the only places on Earth from where you can see the Atlantic and the Pacific Oceans at the same time. It is an active volcano, but last erupted around 1550.
I set off before sunrise. It was a little cold, so I had pulled on tights under my trousers. I intended to reach the top by midday, and then return before dark to get a lift to my hotel.I've always felt safe travelling as a woman on my own, which I've done since my 20s. I love the freedom. When I got to the base of the volcano at 7 in the morning，the ranger （护林员）disagreed to let me go alone, but said OK because an American couple were behind me.
The first part of the climb was beautiful. It was not dry as you might imagine a volcano might be—there were trees and flowers all around, and a dirt road for the farmers who worked around there.I walked for an hour and reached a fair height. The views were impressive, so I stopped to take a photograph
Suddenly I heard violent barking behind me. I turned and saw two dogs running aggressively （挑衅）towards me. I expected them to stop，but they didn't. As they got closer， I could see their teeth looked sharp, and that they looked angry. There was nowhere for me to run. I tried to keep calm, but my heart was racing. I'd never been bitten by a dog, and I couldn't help but fear what would happen. They stopped a dozen feet from where I stood and kept barking.I knew they could move fast, so I didn't want to try to outrun them.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Terrified, I slowly kept walking, saying,"Come on, good dogs!" ______________
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Just at this critical moment, a pickup appeared, driven by the ranger. _________
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答案以及解析
一、
答案：
The First Time I Shared Housework
I used to do no housework, but what my teacher said at the beginning of the term changed everything. In the first class of this term, my teacher advised us to share housework. One Sunday, when I saw my mother washing clothes, I wanted to have a try. I thought it easy to use washing machines. My mother instructed me patiently but I was still awkward. After finishing it, I felt tired. This experience made me realize how great my mother is. Now, whenever I'm at home, I'll manage to spare some time to help with housework.
二、
答案：
Dear George,
I’m happy to learn you take great interest in the special courses in our school, so I am writing to tell you something about a course I have attended.
At the beginning of this semester, I chose to take the labor course aimed at helping students appreciate the value of physical labor and helping students develop into well-rounded individuals. We are required to grow vegetables in the garden and take care of them, like watering them and fertilizing the fields. It offers us a chance to take a taste of our labor fruits earned through effort and sweat. The course is well received and more and more students want to sign up for it.
What about the special course you have attended in your school I hope you can tell me something about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、
答案：
Dear Mariam,
I'm Li Hua from your English poetry class. I'm writing to ask for your help. The annual English Poetry Writing Competition will be held next month. However,it's a struggle for us to decide on the theme and the style. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could give us some practical guidance. Meanwhile, we'd like to invite you to be our judge.
If possible,shall we meet in your office at 4'o clock tomorrow afternoon Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，正负责筹备学校年度英语诗歌创作大赛。你想去找外教Mariam咨询关于诗歌主题等相关的事情，但是发现Mariam不在办公室，请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：找她的原因；约定见面的时间、地点。
1.词汇积累
竞赛：competition→contest
计划：schedule→plan
感激的：grateful→thankful
同时：Meanwhile→At the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The annual English Poetry Writing Competition will be held next month.
拓展句：The annual English Poetry Writing Competition of which I am in charge will be held next month.
[高分句型1] I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could give us some practical guidance. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] However, it’s a struggle for us to decide on the theme and the style (运用了不定式作主语，it是形式主语)
四、
答案：
This online concert is absolutely fantastic. The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for the students from China and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
五、
答案：
Dear fellow students,
At 8:12 a. m. on Nov. 10th, 2020, China's Striver, a deep-sea manned submersible, successfully descended to the deepest part of the earth's oceans, settling at 10,909 meters in the Mariana Trench in the Pacific Ocean, setting a new record for China's manned deep-sea diving.
More than 1,000 scientists and 100 research institutes participated in Striver's research process, who made a ground-breaking contribution to China's scientific research in the deep seabed.
China's Striver will surely make more achievements in the exploration of the deep sea and the protection of the marine ecosystem as well as the utilization of marine resources, demonstrating China's sense of responsibility and strength to the world once again!
六、
答案：
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The ten-year-old was nervous and took a few seconds to consider the situation. Then he dived in, cutting through the waterfall. In a few seconds, he was next to the struggling girl. Panicky, she tried to climb on top of him. Sammy went under for a little while, and then came back up. Staying an arm's length away from the girl, he asked her if she could swim. When she said no, Sammy carefully pulled her onto his back and swam toward the shore.
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Soon, someone came and puled both kids away from the water. The little girl lay on the ground, coughing and too frightened to cry. When Kelley walked onto the scene after her trip with Ben, she saw the crowd gathered near the swimming hole, and her heart sank. Then a woman came up and told her Sammy had saved a girl's life. Relieved, she hurried to Sammy's side and gave him a big hug. "You are my pride and joy," she whispered in his ear.
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答案：
I wondered, “Could it be him ” I dialed the number, gave my full name to a secretary and was put on hold. A long fifteen seconds later, a gentleman was on the line. His opening statement was, “Mr. Kowal (or whatever), I’ve really … missed you.” Then there was silence. Tears welling up in my eyes, I blurted out between sobs, “Mike, I only wish I’d kept in touch with you all these years. I’m really proud of you.” In a trembling voice on the other side, Mike answered, “I wouldn’t be here now if it weren’t for you.”
When we were able to get together, he told me his road to the law. Studying law in the library enabled him to explore his inner depths—the “gangster” he had wanted to be was something of a hero protecting the disadvantaged with knowledge. He studied all the way to the law university while working part-time for his education fees. Now he had risen to be one of the most successful criminal lawyers in Canada. He owed all to me while I thought the greatest good we teachers could do for the students was to assist in revealing the best of their own.
解析：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者20岁时在多伦多教书，有一个学生叫迈克，是街头男孩，作者给他带早餐，分享午餐，教他一些技能，当迈克告诉作者自己想成为歹徒时，作者觉得有必要帮他成为最好的歹徒，于是每周六带他去图书馆学习法律，后来作者结婚了，搬走了，和迈克失去了联系，很多年后作者想知道他后来怎么样了，作者发现迈克的名字作为“法官和律师”标题的一部分。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我想：“会是他吗 ””可知，第一段可描写作者和迈克重新取得联系。
②由第二段首句内容“当我们能在一起时，他告诉了我他的法律之路。”可知，第二段可描写迈克是如何学习法律，成为律师的以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：拨电话——迈克接电话——作者和迈克对话——迈克学习和兼职——成为律师——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①接电话：on the line/answer the phone
②学习：study/learn
③成为：rise to be/become
情绪类
①哭：tears welling up in my eyes/tears come to my eyes
②骄傲：be proud of/take pride in
[高分句型1] I wouldn’t be here now if it weren’t for you.（由if引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型2] He owed all to me while I thought the greatest good we teachers could do for the students was to assist in revealing the best of their own.（由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that和that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that）
八、
答案：
She offered me something to eat and drink while I waited. She constantly talked with me and just kept me calm. She told me that they also had a daughter of my age. Her words made me calm down and waited patiently. An hour later, the man appeared again, saying that it was all finished and seemed to be running smoothly. I hopped in my car and was sure enough everything was working perfectly again, I couldn't thank him enough for their kindness.
I wrote him a check for the transmission and tried to give him more. However, he didn't accept it, just saying that he would hope someone would do the same thing for his daughter, I was moved that the man would take several hours out of his day to help a complete stranger, In addition, I held a firm belief that his daughter would get generous help when she was in need because there would always be the same people as her father and the kindness would surely make a huge difference.
九、
答案：
Paragraph 1：
The first idea that hit Lora was to attract the cougar’s attention away from her kids. Lora rushed herself toward it, blindly seizing it by the neck. “Come stay behind me!” She shouted to the kids. On hearing it, the three children ran to Lora screaming. Just as she was about to shake the beast from side to side when it turned around abruptly, hurting her ear with its paw. Lora didn’t have time to care about it. Still grasping the cat’s back legs, she turned to Mikey, “Run back home! Run!” Mikey quickly bent down to hold Lisa in his arms and shouted to Paul, “Run.” The three kids looked back again and again as they were rushing backward.
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Just as Lora was struggling with the beast with almost her last strength, she saw the three kids running back, each holding a stick. They came back to help their mother. The three kids screamed and swung their sticks at the cougar. It was probably their aggressive movements and harsh scream that scared the big cat. The cougar leapt onto the tree and ran away. Lora hugged her brave kids tightly. It was the greatest challenge Lora and her kids had met in their lives. Her friends and neighbors applauded their strength. And Lora knew that they could overcome any difficulty from that day on.
十、
答案：
Terrified, I slowly kept walking, saying, "Come on, good dogs!” Suddenly, one dog dashed up towards me, sinking his teeth into my leg. "Oh, my God, I'm in a dog's mouth and he's trying to swallow me," I thought to myself, with the pain taking my breath away as I felt his teeth in my flesh. I picked up a rock to fight him off, but was nervous that he would go for my neck or that the other one would come to attack me together. Facing these two aggressive dogs, I desperately felt at a loss. Hardly could I step out of the trouble on my own.
Just at this critical moment, a pickup appeared, driven by the ranger: Seeing the state I was in, he immediately stopped his pickup, opened the door, and signaled to me to get in. When we reached the base, he helped me bandage the leg up, earnestly reminding me that safety comes first while travelling. I felt relieved and grateful. And from then on, I travel carefully as well as cautiously. After all, nothing is more precious than life.
解析：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者背包旅行时，计划爬一座叫巴鲁火山的火山。结果在爬山途中，遇到了两只凶猛狗，被咬伤了腿。幸亏得到了护林员的帮助，把作者带回了基地，进行了包扎。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我吓坏了，慢慢地走着，说：‘来吧，好狗!’”可知，第一段可描写作者被狗咬伤的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“就在这个关键时刻，一辆皮卡出现了，是护林员开的。”可知，第二段可描写作者得救的经过。
2.续写线索：被咬——绝望——皮卡出现——得救——回基地——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
猛冲：dash up/rush to
到达：reach/arrive at
出现：appear/emerge
情绪类
茫然：feel at a loss / be lost
宝贵：precious /valuable
[高分句型1] Hardly could I step out of the trouble on my own. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Facing these two aggressive dogs, I desperately felt at a loss. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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