备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（图画作文）考试试卷

备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（图画作文）
一、图画作文
1．（2022高三上·上海开学考）Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求写一篇文章。
内容要求：
描述漫画内容：
分析漫画所揭示的问题；提出你的看法
【答案】From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thoughts or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be in dependent and become truly successful.
【知识点】看图写话
【解析】【分析】本题考查看图写话。孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求写一篇文章。内容要求：1）描述漫画内容；2）分析漫画所揭示的问题；3）提出你的看法。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有较强的布局谋篇的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意要运用一般现在时，上下文注意连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节的问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章更有档次。
【点评】本篇书面表达，要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如：It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.运用了同位语从句；As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thoughts or creative ideas.运用了so......that引导的结果状语从句。
2．（2022高二下·安徽期末）请你观察下面这幅图，写一篇100词左右的英语短文投给校报，谈谈你对读图后的感受和对劳动的看法。
【答案】As the picture shows, some parents love their children so much that they don't let them do housework at home. They think that their children are too busy with their studies and they only expect them to do well in their lessons.However, I think children should help their parents do housework at home, which can help them develop their ability to live on their own and promote emotional communication among family.
All in all, labour can do good to children both mentally and physically. It's time for us to experience the pleasure of labour. Let's take action right now!
【知识点】看图写话；图画式说明文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图画类写作。要求考生根据提示可知，本篇为一篇说明文；文章必须涵盖下列内容：1、简单描述图片。2、分析造成此现象的原因。3、谈谈自己的看法。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：As the picture shows, some parents love their children so much that they don't let them do housework at home. 运用了非限制性定语从句，结果状语从句；They think that their children are too busy with their studies and they only expect them to do well in their lessons.运用了宾语从句，并列句；However, I think children should help their parents do housework at home, which can help them develop their ability to live on their own and promote emotional communication among family. 运用了宾语从句，非限制性定语从句； It's time for us to experience the pleasure of labour.运用了it作形式主语； Let's take action right now!运用了祈使句。
3．（2021·河源模拟）请用"中秋节的等待"为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评论。
要求：文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；
注意：1）词数 80左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival's waiting
It's the Mid-Autumn Festival today, and it's a traditional festival for family reunion. Early in the morning, parents have prepared abundant delicious dishes and desserts for their children. But it's a quarter past one now. To the parents' disappointment, their children haven't come yet. Frustrated, father prepares to phone them and beg them to come while mother looks at the door now and then, expecting their children's coming.
What a sad scene! Nowadays, always occupied with their own business, children can hardly spare time to stay with their parents. They have thousands of excuses to be unavailable when needed, which I think is obviously wrong. As a matter of fact, no matter how busy a man is, he should spend some time with his parents. Only in this way can he reward his parents.
【知识点】看图写话；图画式议论文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生结合图画内容以"中秋节的等待"为题写一篇短文，要求必须包括描述和评论两部分。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It's the Mid-Autumn Festival today, and it's a traditional festival for family reunion. 运用了并列句； Frustrated, father prepares to phone them and beg them to come while mother looks at the door now and then, expecting their children's coming.运用了形容词作状语，运用了对比并列句；What a sad scene! 运用了感叹句；They have thousands of excuses to be unavailable when needed, which I think is obviously wrong. 运用了非限制性定语从句；As a matter of fact, no matter how busy a man is, he should spend some time with his parents.运用了让步状语从句； Only in this way can he reward his parents.运用了倒装句。
4．（2021·龙岩模拟）假定你是李华，明天英语课前将做主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”的简短演讲，请从以下图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，内容包括：1）你的选择及理由；2）该Symbol的相关内容；3. 你的愿望。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。
My Favorite China Symbol
Dear classmates,
……
Thank you!
【答案】Dear classmates,
Many figures, customs and buildings are considered as China symbols. My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing. Chinese Calligraphy is a most abstract art form. It is not only just a means of communication but also a means of displaying the dynamic forces of the paper, and the flexibility of the brush. Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.
"The way characters are written is a portrait of the person who writes them" is quite impressive. I hope all of you will come to love it.
Thank you!
【知识点】看图写话；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一份演讲稿。写作背景：明天英语课前将做主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”的简短演讲。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你的选择及理由；2）该Symbol的相关内容；3. 你的愿望。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Many figures, customs and buildings are considered as China symbols. 运用了被动语态；My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing. 运用了原因状语从句；Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.运用了现在分词作伴随状语；“The way characters are written is a portrait of the person who writes them" is quite impressive.运用了限制性定语从句； I hope all of you will come to love it.运用了宾语从句。
5．（2020高三上·西青期末）假如你是高中生李津，读报纸时看到下面这幅漫画，很有感触。请给你校校刊的“英语园地”栏目写—篇英文稿件。要求如下：
1）简要描述漫画内容；2）分析其揭示的问题；3）谈谈个人感想。
注意:
1）词数不少于100；
2）内容充实、行文连贯；
3）稿件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last weekend I saw an interesting cartoon in the newspaper. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon,
【答案】 Last weekend I saw an interesting cartoon in the newspaper. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon, a man asks his son to fetch him another glass of water. To his surprise, the boy refuses. He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vocation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn't do it again.
The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents. The cartoon got me reflecting. We care little about our parents while parents work hard to provide their children with a comfortable life. We should do more to reward our parents and love them in our daily life.
【知识点】看图写话；图画式议论文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图画作文，要求考生以高中生李津的身份给你校校刊的“英语园地”栏目写—篇英文稿件。写作背景：你读报纸时看到下面这幅漫画，很有感触。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）简要描述漫画内容；2）分析其揭示的问题；3）谈谈个人感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vocation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn't do it again.运用了宾语从句，并列句；The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents. 运用了表语从句；We care little about our parents while parents work hard to provide their children with a comfortable life. 运用了让步状语从句。
6．（2020高三上·上海期中）Directions: Write an English
composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李华，学校有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示），你希望加入其中一个。请你写一篇日记，谈谈你的想法。内容必须包括：
1）你希望加入的社团
2）选择该社团的原因
3）你可以为该社团做些什么
注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】 I am Li Hua. As a senior high school student, joining a community that l am keen on after class has played a big role in my three-year study career. Recently, four communities including Science club, English theatre club, Eco club and sports club in my school are recruiting new members, which has attached many students' attention. As far as l am concerned, l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons. First and foremost, not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness. In the second place, the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period. Last but not least, doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as football, basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation. All these reasons make me be absorbed in joining Sports club. If l am elected to be a member of Sports club, l will take active part in all activities. What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice. l am fascinated by being a member of Sports club.
【知识点】看图写话；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇日记。写作背景：你的学校有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示），你希望加入其中一个。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你希望加入的社团；2）选择该社团的原因；3）你可以为该社团做些什么。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： As a senior high school student, joining a community that l am keen on after class has played a big role in my three-year study career. 运用了限制性定语从句；Recently, four communities including Science club, English theatre club, Eco club and sports club in my school are recruiting new members, which has attached many students' attention. 运用了非限制性定语从句；First and foremost, not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness.运用了倒装句和并列句； In the second place, the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period. 运用了限制性定语从句和表语从句；Last but not least, doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as football, basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation.运用了限制性定语从句和目的状语从句；If l am elected to be a member of Sports club, l will take active part in all activities. 运用了条件状语从句；What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice.运用了主语从句，表语从句，同位语从句。
7．（2020高三上·北京开学考）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。停课期间，妈妈过生日，你在学习之余给妈妈准备了丰盛的生日晚餐。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇稿件，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
【答案】 During the winter vacation, my father and I celebrated my mother's birthday, which made me feel great.
At eight that morning, I was about to study when suddenly my father came into my room and whispered to me that day was my mother's birthday. Wow! It was time for me to celebrate it for her. I decided to bake a birthday cake and prepare a rich family dinner in person. After finishing all my work, I learned how to bake a cake on line without delay. It took me a long time to make it. And then, I was immediately busy preparing all dishes.
The moment my mother stepped into, the celebration began. My father expressed his best wishes with a bunch of roses. My mother was moved with tears rolling in her eyes, seeing all we had done. Chatting merrily, we were immersed in the warm atmosphere.
【知识点】看图写话；图画式记叙文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图画作文。第一步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。停课期间，妈妈过生日，你在学习之余给妈妈准备了丰盛的生日晚餐。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇稿件，记述整个过程。第二步：根据图片确定文章内容和关键词语，第一幅图要表达爸爸告诉作者今天是妈妈的生日；第二幅图表达作者从网上搜寻如何制作蛋糕；第三幅图表达作者为妈妈制作生日蛋糕，准备丰盛的晚餐；第四幅图表达作者和爸爸为妈妈庆祝生日。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：During the winter vacation, my father and I celebrated my mother's birthday, which made me feel great.与永乐非限制性定语从句； At eight that morning, I was about to study when suddenly my father came into my room and whispered to me that day was my mother's birthday. 运用了时间状语从句；Wow! It was time for me to celebrate it for her. 运用了it作形式主语； The moment my mother stepped into, the celebration began.与永乐时间状语从句； My mother was moved with tears rolling in her eyes, seeing all we had done. 运用了限制性定语从句。
备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（图画作文）
一、图画作文
1．（2022高三上·上海开学考）Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求写一篇文章。
内容要求：
描述漫画内容：
分析漫画所揭示的问题；提出你的看法
2．（2022高二下·安徽期末）请你观察下面这幅图，写一篇100词左右的英语短文投给校报，谈谈你对读图后的感受和对劳动的看法。
3．（2021·河源模拟）请用"中秋节的等待"为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评论。
要求：文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；
注意：1）词数 80左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4．（2021·龙岩模拟）假定你是李华，明天英语课前将做主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”的简短演讲，请从以下图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，内容包括：1）你的选择及理由；2）该Symbol的相关内容；3. 你的愿望。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。
My Favorite China Symbol
Dear classmates,
……
Thank you!
5．（2020高三上·西青期末）假如你是高中生李津，读报纸时看到下面这幅漫画，很有感触。请给你校校刊的“英语园地”栏目写—篇英文稿件。要求如下：
1）简要描述漫画内容；2）分析其揭示的问题；3）谈谈个人感想。
注意:
1）词数不少于100；
2）内容充实、行文连贯；
3）稿件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last weekend I saw an interesting cartoon in the newspaper. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon,
6．（2020高三上·上海期中）Directions: Write an English
composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李华，学校有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示），你希望加入其中一个。请你写一篇日记，谈谈你的想法。内容必须包括：
1）你希望加入的社团
2）选择该社团的原因
3）你可以为该社团做些什么
注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
7．（2020高三上·北京开学考）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。停课期间，妈妈过生日，你在学习之余给妈妈准备了丰盛的生日晚餐。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇稿件，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
答案解析部分
1．【答案】From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thoughts or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be in dependent and become truly successful.
【知识点】看图写话
【解析】【分析】本题考查看图写话。孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求写一篇文章。内容要求：1）描述漫画内容；2）分析漫画所揭示的问题；3）提出你的看法。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有较强的布局谋篇的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意要运用一般现在时，上下文注意连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节的问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章更有档次。
【点评】本篇书面表达，要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如：It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.运用了同位语从句；As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thoughts or creative ideas.运用了so......that引导的结果状语从句。
2．【答案】As the picture shows, some parents love their children so much that they don't let them do housework at home. They think that their children are too busy with their studies and they only expect them to do well in their lessons.However, I think children should help their parents do housework at home, which can help them develop their ability to live on their own and promote emotional communication among family.
All in all, labour can do good to children both mentally and physically. It's time for us to experience the pleasure of labour. Let's take action right now!
【知识点】看图写话；图画式说明文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图画类写作。要求考生根据提示可知，本篇为一篇说明文；文章必须涵盖下列内容：1、简单描述图片。2、分析造成此现象的原因。3、谈谈自己的看法。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：As the picture shows, some parents love their children so much that they don't let them do housework at home. 运用了非限制性定语从句，结果状语从句；They think that their children are too busy with their studies and they only expect them to do well in their lessons.运用了宾语从句，并列句；However, I think children should help their parents do housework at home, which can help them develop their ability to live on their own and promote emotional communication among family. 运用了宾语从句，非限制性定语从句； It's time for us to experience the pleasure of labour.运用了it作形式主语； Let's take action right now!运用了祈使句。
3．【答案】The Mid-Autumn Festival's waiting
It's the Mid-Autumn Festival today, and it's a traditional festival for family reunion. Early in the morning, parents have prepared abundant delicious dishes and desserts for their children. But it's a quarter past one now. To the parents' disappointment, their children haven't come yet. Frustrated, father prepares to phone them and beg them to come while mother looks at the door now and then, expecting their children's coming.
What a sad scene! Nowadays, always occupied with their own business, children can hardly spare time to stay with their parents. They have thousands of excuses to be unavailable when needed, which I think is obviously wrong. As a matter of fact, no matter how busy a man is, he should spend some time with his parents. Only in this way can he reward his parents.
【知识点】看图写话；图画式议论文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生结合图画内容以"中秋节的等待"为题写一篇短文，要求必须包括描述和评论两部分。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It's the Mid-Autumn Festival today, and it's a traditional festival for family reunion. 运用了并列句； Frustrated, father prepares to phone them and beg them to come while mother looks at the door now and then, expecting their children's coming.运用了形容词作状语，运用了对比并列句；What a sad scene! 运用了感叹句；They have thousands of excuses to be unavailable when needed, which I think is obviously wrong. 运用了非限制性定语从句；As a matter of fact, no matter how busy a man is, he should spend some time with his parents.运用了让步状语从句； Only in this way can he reward his parents.运用了倒装句。
4．【答案】Dear classmates,
Many figures, customs and buildings are considered as China symbols. My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing. Chinese Calligraphy is a most abstract art form. It is not only just a means of communication but also a means of displaying the dynamic forces of the paper, and the flexibility of the brush. Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.
"The way characters are written is a portrait of the person who writes them" is quite impressive. I hope all of you will come to love it.
Thank you!
【知识点】看图写话；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一份演讲稿。写作背景：明天英语课前将做主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”的简短演讲。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你的选择及理由；2）该Symbol的相关内容；3. 你的愿望。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Many figures, customs and buildings are considered as China symbols. 运用了被动语态；My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing. 运用了原因状语从句；Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.运用了现在分词作伴随状语；“The way characters are written is a portrait of the person who writes them" is quite impressive.运用了限制性定语从句； I hope all of you will come to love it.运用了宾语从句。
5．【答案】 Last weekend I saw an interesting cartoon in the newspaper. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon, a man asks his son to fetch him another glass of water. To his surprise, the boy refuses. He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vocation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn't do it again.
The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents. The cartoon got me reflecting. We care little about our parents while parents work hard to provide their children with a comfortable life. We should do more to reward our parents and love them in our daily life.
【知识点】看图写话；图画式议论文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图画作文，要求考生以高中生李津的身份给你校校刊的“英语园地”栏目写—篇英文稿件。写作背景：你读报纸时看到下面这幅漫画，很有感触。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）简要描述漫画内容；2）分析其揭示的问题；3）谈谈个人感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vocation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn't do it again.运用了宾语从句，并列句；The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents. 运用了表语从句；We care little about our parents while parents work hard to provide their children with a comfortable life. 运用了让步状语从句。
6．【答案】 I am Li Hua. As a senior high school student, joining a community that l am keen on after class has played a big role in my three-year study career. Recently, four communities including Science club, English theatre club, Eco club and sports club in my school are recruiting new members, which has attached many students' attention. As far as l am concerned, l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons. First and foremost, not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness. In the second place, the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period. Last but not least, doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as football, basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation. All these reasons make me be absorbed in joining Sports club. If l am elected to be a member of Sports club, l will take active part in all activities. What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice. l am fascinated by being a member of Sports club.
【知识点】看图写话；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇日记。写作背景：你的学校有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示），你希望加入其中一个。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你希望加入的社团；2）选择该社团的原因；3）你可以为该社团做些什么。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： As a senior high school student, joining a community that l am keen on after class has played a big role in my three-year study career. 运用了限制性定语从句；Recently, four communities including Science club, English theatre club, Eco club and sports club in my school are recruiting new members, which has attached many students' attention. 运用了非限制性定语从句；First and foremost, not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness.运用了倒装句和并列句； In the second place, the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period. 运用了限制性定语从句和表语从句；Last but not least, doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as football, basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation.运用了限制性定语从句和目的状语从句；If l am elected to be a member of Sports club, l will take active part in all activities. 运用了条件状语从句；What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice.运用了主语从句，表语从句，同位语从句。
7．【答案】 During the winter vacation, my father and I celebrated my mother's birthday, which made me feel great.
At eight that morning, I was about to study when suddenly my father came into my room and whispered to me that day was my mother's birthday. Wow! It was time for me to celebrate it for her. I decided to bake a birthday cake and prepare a rich family dinner in person. After finishing all my work, I learned how to bake a cake on line without delay. It took me a long time to make it. And then, I was immediately busy preparing all dishes.
The moment my mother stepped into, the celebration began. My father expressed his best wishes with a bunch of roses. My mother was moved with tears rolling in her eyes, seeing all we had done. Chatting merrily, we were immersed in the warm atmosphere.
【知识点】看图写话；图画式记叙文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图画作文。第一步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。停课期间，妈妈过生日，你在学习之余给妈妈准备了丰盛的生日晚餐。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇稿件，记述整个过程。第二步：根据图片确定文章内容和关键词语，第一幅图要表达爸爸告诉作者今天是妈妈的生日；第二幅图表达作者从网上搜寻如何制作蛋糕；第三幅图表达作者为妈妈制作生日蛋糕，准备丰盛的晚餐；第四幅图表达作者和爸爸为妈妈庆祝生日。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：During the winter vacation, my father and I celebrated my mother's birthday, which made me feel great.与永乐非限制性定语从句； At eight that morning, I was about to study when suddenly my father came into my room and whispered to me that day was my mother's birthday. 运用了时间状语从句；Wow! It was time for me to celebrate it for her. 运用了it作形式主语； The moment my mother stepped into, the celebration began.与永乐时间状语从句； My mother was moved with tears rolling in her eyes, seeing all we had done. 运用了限制性定语从句。