备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（议论文）考试试卷

备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（议论文）
一、书面表达
1．（2021高三下·重庆开学考）假定你是李华。上周英语课，你班以“Would you rather have an immediate reward or not ”为主题，就“付出需要马上得到回报吗”进行了讨论。有人赞成，有人反对。请你根据讨论结果，写一篇100词左右的文章谈谈你对这一话题的看法。
注意：1）标题和开头已为你写出，不计入总数；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Would
you rather have an immediate reward or not
Last
week. we had a discussion on" Would you rather have an immediate reward or
not".
【答案】 Would you rather have an immediate reward or not
Last week, we had a discussion on "Would you rather have an immediate reward or not".
Most students believe that there should be immediate rewards for making efforts. For them, any feeling, thought or progress, either positive or negative, can be a kind of "reward". It can motivate us to better complete our tasks.
Others, however, argue that the goal of making efforts is to enjoy the process instead of the result. For example, parents make great efforts to raise their children but want nothing back. All they want is to keep them company as they grow up.
As for me, people cannot receive immediate return after doing work. For example, artistic performers keep on practicing hard every day, even if they might not receive a quick return. If they only cared about money-related rewarding, there'd be less real art.
【知识点】文字式议论文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇议论文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇文章，谈谈自己的看法。写作背景：上周英语课，你班以“Would you rather have an immediate reward or not ”为主题，就“付出需要马上得到回报吗”进行了讨论。有人赞成，有人反对。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Most students believe that there should be immediate rewards for making efforts. 运用了宾语从句；Others, however, argue that the goal of making efforts is to enjoy the process instead of the result. 运用了宾语从句；All they want is to keep them company as they grow up.运用了限制性定语从句，时间状语从句； For example, artistic performers keep on practicing hard every day, even if they might not receive a quick return.运用了让步状语从句； If they only cared about money-related rewarding, there'd be less real art.运用了条件状语从句。
2．（2021高三上·安徽竞赛）近年来，有些专家建议高考取消英语或是把英语作为选考，甚至有人大代表提议高考取消英语。《21世纪学生英文报》就高考要不要取消英语进行征文，现请你写一篇100词左右的文章表述自己的观点。
【答案】 As we all know, English is an important subject in schools of China. But recently, some people think that English should be totally canceled in the College Entrance Examination.
Personally, I don't agree with this opinion. There is no doubt that English is the most popular language in the world. With the Earth becoming a village, people all over the world mix together and they need to communicate with each other in a universal language. Besides, if English exam is canceled, teachers will give little attention to English teaching, and school will arrange more time for students to learn other subjects, leading to no students learning English.
So canceling English in exams just means learning English stops in our schools, which would result in serious problems. I insist that English should not be canceled in exams.
【知识点】文字式议论文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇议论文写作，要求考生写一篇100词左右的文章表述自己的观点。写作背景：近年来，有些专家建议高考取消英语或是把英语作为选考，甚至有人大代表提议高考取消英语。《21世纪学生英文报》就高考要不要取消英语进行征文。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如：As we all know, English is an important subject in schools of China. 运用了非限制性定语从句；But recently, some people think that English should be totally canceled in the College Entrance Examination.运用了宾语从句； There is no doubt that English is the most popular language in the world. 运用了同位语从句；With the Earth becoming a village, people all over the world mix together and they need to communicate with each other in a universal language. 运用了with的复合结构，并列句；Besides, if English exam is canceled, teachers will give little attention to English teaching, and school will arrange more time for students to learn other subjects, leading to no students learning English.运用了条件状语从句，并列句；So canceling English in exams just means learning English stops in our schools, which would result in serious problems.运用了动名词作主语，非限制性定语从句； I insist that English should not be canceled in exams.运用了宾语从句，虚拟语气。
3．（2021高二下·和平期中）假如你是李响，你在YouTube上看到了一位英国的手工艺者制作木篮的视频，在视频下方的留言处一位叫James的英国人留言：I can't understand why some people spend their whole life doing just
one thing. I know these activities require time and effort to do, but I'd
rather try as many different things as possible. I don't want to regret things
when I'm old.
请你给他回复，表达你对他的观点的看法。主要内容包括：
1）同意或不同意他的观点
2）表达你的观点，并举2个例子说明。
3）字数：不少于100字。
Hi, James!
【答案】 Although you have your reasons, I can't agree with you. In my opinion, handwork is not a waste of time and energy, but an artistic act that can cultivate the body and mind. On the one hand, if you feel distressed and empty in your life, handwork is an excellent choice to relax your body and mind. During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, preventing you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind. On the other hand, when you do handwork, it will bring you not only a sense of achievement, but also the inheritance and feeling of traditional culture.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式议论文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生对James在YouTube上的一位英国的手工艺者制作木篮的视频下的留言表达观点，并举例说明。1. 词汇积累；压抑的：distressed →depressed；极好的：excellent →wonderful选择：choice →option集中于：be focused on=be concentrated on2. 句式拓展；简单句变复合句；原句：During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, preventing you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind. 拓展句：During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, which can prevent you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind.
【点评】考查书面表达能力。本书面表达审题准确，观点明确，行文流畅，条理清晰，层次分明，词汇丰富，句式多变，运用了较多的语法结构，例如文章运用了in my opinion、on the one hand...on the other hand等高级词汇； Although you have your reasons, I can't agree with you. 运用了although引导的让步状语从句；... if you feel distressed and empty in your life, handwork is an excellent choice to relax your body and mind. 运用了if引导的条件状语从句； During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, preventing you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind. 运用了动名词短语做宾语和现在分词短语做状语等。
4．（2020高三上·胶州期中）Someone says, like a
musical symphony, life has high and low moments, and somewhere in between are
those moments we call "bittersweet".
请结合以上材料，给你校英文报写一篇短文，介绍你高中生活中的不同时刻，并总结经过这些时刻后，你对生活的态度或认识。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）请在答题卡的相应位置做答。
【答案】The bittersweet moments
How time flies! I'm now in senior year. Looking back on the senior school life, I have high and low moments. However, the bittersweet moments impress me most.
The bittersweet moments are when I finish the homework, when I have a heart-to-heart talk with my close friend, when I'm back home seeing my parents and when I sit through all the exams.
It is through those bittersweet moments that I grow up. And I gradually take a positive attitude toward life.
【知识点】文字式议论文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求考生给学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍高中生活中的不同时刻，并总结经过这些时刻后，对生活的态度或认识。第一步：审题；体裁：夹叙夹议文；时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法；总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：请结合以上材料，给你校英文报写一篇短文，介绍你高中生活中的不同时刻，并总结经过这些时刻后，你对生活的态度或认识。第二步:列提纲，连词成句。根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第三步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：And 2.表转折对比关系：However 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：How time flies!运用了感叹句； Looking back on the senior school life, I have high and low moments. 运用了现在分词作伴随状语；The bittersweet moments are when I finish the homework, when I have a heart-to-heart talk with my close friend, when I'm back home seeing my parents and when I sit through all the exams.运用了表语从句；It is through those bittersweet moments that I grow up. 运用了强调句。
5．（2020高三上·上海月考）Write an English
composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in
Chinese.
成长道路上难免遇到来自同伴的压力(peer pressure)。同伴压力可能给我们带来积极或消极的影响。请结合自己生活中的一个具体事例, 谈谈你的体会。
注意:请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】 There is no doubt that we are faced with peer pressure every day. Peer pressure has both advantages and disadvantages, and the key is with what kind of mentality we look at it.
If we are always envious of others famous brand clothes or shoes, we will inevitably have the desire to compare ourselves, which is bad for our personal development. On the contrary, peer pressure which is from studies will motivate us to get good grades For example, when my deskmate got a better grade in the mid-term exam than me, I made up my mind to surpass him in the model exam, As a result, I made full use of time to study hard and spared no effort to prepare for the final exam. As it turned out, I did better in the final exam than him
In word, peer pressure is a normal phenomenon, which we can't avoid. And as long as we face it positively, it will be beneficial to our personal development.
【知识点】文字式议论文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求就来自同伴的压力谈谈自己的体会。第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求就来自同伴的压力谈谈自己的体会：成长道路上难免遇到来自同伴的压力(peer pressure)。同伴压力可能给我们带来积极或消极的影响。请结合自己生活中的一个具体事例, 谈谈你的体会，时态应为一般过去时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； peer pressure（同龄压力），mentality（心态），surpass（超过），beneficial（有益的）， motivate（激励），inevitably（不可避免地）及compare（攀比）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：There is no doubt that we are faced with peer pressure every day. 运用了同位语从句；Peer pressure has both advantages and disadvantages, and the key is with what kind of mentality we look at it.运用了并列句和宾语从句；If we are always envious of others famous brand clothes or shoes, we will inevitably have the desire to compare ourselves, which is bad for our personal development. 运用了条件状语从句和非限制性定语从句；On the contrary, peer pressure which is from studies will motivate us to get good grades .运用了限制性定语从句；For example, when my deskmate got a better grade in the mid-term exam than me, I made up my mind to surpass him in the model exam, 运用了时间状语从句； As it turned out, I did better in the final exam than him运用了非限制性定语从句； In word, peer pressure is a normal phenomenon, which we can't avoid. 运用了非限制性定语从句；And as long as we face it positively, it will be beneficial to our personal development.运用了条件状语从句。
6．（2020高三上·上海开学考）Directions: Write an
English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below
in Chinese.
今年，湖南留守(left-behind)女孩钟芳蓉以676分报考北大考古(archaeology)专业，一些网民评论“专业太冷门”“浪费了分数”，认为报考计算机、金融、人工智能等专业更有“钱途”。你是否赞同这些网民的评论，请谈谈你的看法并说明理由。
【答案】 A left-behind girl Zhong Fangrong applied for a major in archaeology at Peking University with a score of 676, which has been widely discussed by netizens. They suggest she should study computer, finance, artificial intelligence or other majors, which might bring about a better earning journey. However, I strongly support her idea.
On the one hand, archaeology major is her dream. Peking University archaeology major as a key subject in the field has a great influence in the world, praised as "the cradle of Chinese archaeologists" and "the center" of Chinese archaeology research. China has a long history of culture and contains varieties of treasures, especially those previous buried underground. She can use what she has learnt to help protect them. On the other hand, we don't know what might happen in future. The hot major this year is not necessarily the hot major next year, and the cold major this year is not necessarily the cold major next year either. The development of archaeology major still depends on the big situation of the future. So it is unnecessary to worry about it. Good luck to the brave girl!
【知识点】文字式议论文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇开放性作文，要求考生写一篇文章，发表对今年湖南留守女孩钟芳蓉以676分报考北大考古专业的看法并说明理由。第一步：审题，体裁：议论文，人称：第三人称为主，时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法，要求：1.发表看法；2.说明理由；3.表达祝愿。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）left-behind；apply for；archaeology；major；a better earning journey；has a great influence；praised as；varieties of；depend on第三步：连词成句， 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表转折对比关系：not；However；On the one hand,… on the other hand,…2.表并列补充关系：and；either；3.表因果关系：So连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： A left-behind girl Zhong Fangrong applied for a major in archaeology at Peking University with a score of 676, which has been widely discussed by netizens. 运用了非限制性定语从句；They suggest she should study computer, finance, artificial intelligence or other majors, which might bring about a better earning journey. 运用了宾语从句和虚拟语气；She can use what she has learnt to help protect them. 运用了宾语从句；On the other hand, we don't know what might happen in future. 运用了宾语从句；The hot major this year is not necessarily the hot major next year, and the cold major this year is not necessarily the cold major next year either. 运用了并列句；So it is unnecessary to worry about it. 运用了it作形式主语。
备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（议论文）
一、书面表达
1．（2021高三下·重庆开学考）假定你是李华。上周英语课，你班以“Would you rather have an immediate reward or not ”为主题，就“付出需要马上得到回报吗”进行了讨论。有人赞成，有人反对。请你根据讨论结果，写一篇100词左右的文章谈谈你对这一话题的看法。
注意：1）标题和开头已为你写出，不计入总数；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Would
you rather have an immediate reward or not
Last
week. we had a discussion on" Would you rather have an immediate reward or
not".
2．（2021高三上·安徽竞赛）近年来，有些专家建议高考取消英语或是把英语作为选考，甚至有人大代表提议高考取消英语。《21世纪学生英文报》就高考要不要取消英语进行征文，现请你写一篇100词左右的文章表述自己的观点。
3．（2021高二下·和平期中）假如你是李响，你在YouTube上看到了一位英国的手工艺者制作木篮的视频，在视频下方的留言处一位叫James的英国人留言：I can't understand why some people spend their whole life doing just
one thing. I know these activities require time and effort to do, but I'd
rather try as many different things as possible. I don't want to regret things
when I'm old.
请你给他回复，表达你对他的观点的看法。主要内容包括：
1）同意或不同意他的观点
2）表达你的观点，并举2个例子说明。
3）字数：不少于100字。
Hi, James!
4．（2020高三上·胶州期中）Someone says, like a
musical symphony, life has high and low moments, and somewhere in between are
those moments we call "bittersweet".
请结合以上材料，给你校英文报写一篇短文，介绍你高中生活中的不同时刻，并总结经过这些时刻后，你对生活的态度或认识。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）请在答题卡的相应位置做答。
5．（2020高三上·上海月考）Write an English
composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in
Chinese.
成长道路上难免遇到来自同伴的压力(peer pressure)。同伴压力可能给我们带来积极或消极的影响。请结合自己生活中的一个具体事例, 谈谈你的体会。
注意:请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
6．（2020高三上·上海开学考）Directions: Write an
English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below
in Chinese.
今年，湖南留守(left-behind)女孩钟芳蓉以676分报考北大考古(archaeology)专业，一些网民评论“专业太冷门”“浪费了分数”，认为报考计算机、金融、人工智能等专业更有“钱途”。你是否赞同这些网民的评论，请谈谈你的看法并说明理由。
答案解析部分
1．【答案】 Would you rather have an immediate reward or not
Last week, we had a discussion on "Would you rather have an immediate reward or not".
Most students believe that there should be immediate rewards for making efforts. For them, any feeling, thought or progress, either positive or negative, can be a kind of "reward". It can motivate us to better complete our tasks.
Others, however, argue that the goal of making efforts is to enjoy the process instead of the result. For example, parents make great efforts to raise their children but want nothing back. All they want is to keep them company as they grow up.
As for me, people cannot receive immediate return after doing work. For example, artistic performers keep on practicing hard every day, even if they might not receive a quick return. If they only cared about money-related rewarding, there'd be less real art.
【知识点】文字式议论文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇议论文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇文章，谈谈自己的看法。写作背景：上周英语课，你班以“Would you rather have an immediate reward or not ”为主题，就“付出需要马上得到回报吗”进行了讨论。有人赞成，有人反对。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Most students believe that there should be immediate rewards for making efforts. 运用了宾语从句；Others, however, argue that the goal of making efforts is to enjoy the process instead of the result. 运用了宾语从句；All they want is to keep them company as they grow up.运用了限制性定语从句，时间状语从句； For example, artistic performers keep on practicing hard every day, even if they might not receive a quick return.运用了让步状语从句； If they only cared about money-related rewarding, there'd be less real art.运用了条件状语从句。
2．【答案】 As we all know, English is an important subject in schools of China. But recently, some people think that English should be totally canceled in the College Entrance Examination.
Personally, I don't agree with this opinion. There is no doubt that English is the most popular language in the world. With the Earth becoming a village, people all over the world mix together and they need to communicate with each other in a universal language. Besides, if English exam is canceled, teachers will give little attention to English teaching, and school will arrange more time for students to learn other subjects, leading to no students learning English.
So canceling English in exams just means learning English stops in our schools, which would result in serious problems. I insist that English should not be canceled in exams.
【知识点】文字式议论文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇议论文写作，要求考生写一篇100词左右的文章表述自己的观点。写作背景：近年来，有些专家建议高考取消英语或是把英语作为选考，甚至有人大代表提议高考取消英语。《21世纪学生英文报》就高考要不要取消英语进行征文。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如：As we all know, English is an important subject in schools of China. 运用了非限制性定语从句；But recently, some people think that English should be totally canceled in the College Entrance Examination.运用了宾语从句； There is no doubt that English is the most popular language in the world. 运用了同位语从句；With the Earth becoming a village, people all over the world mix together and they need to communicate with each other in a universal language. 运用了with的复合结构，并列句；Besides, if English exam is canceled, teachers will give little attention to English teaching, and school will arrange more time for students to learn other subjects, leading to no students learning English.运用了条件状语从句，并列句；So canceling English in exams just means learning English stops in our schools, which would result in serious problems.运用了动名词作主语，非限制性定语从句； I insist that English should not be canceled in exams.运用了宾语从句，虚拟语气。
3．【答案】 Although you have your reasons, I can't agree with you. In my opinion, handwork is not a waste of time and energy, but an artistic act that can cultivate the body and mind. On the one hand, if you feel distressed and empty in your life, handwork is an excellent choice to relax your body and mind. During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, preventing you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind. On the other hand, when you do handwork, it will bring you not only a sense of achievement, but also the inheritance and feeling of traditional culture.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式议论文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生对James在YouTube上的一位英国的手工艺者制作木篮的视频下的留言表达观点，并举例说明。1. 词汇积累；压抑的：distressed →depressed；极好的：excellent →wonderful选择：choice →option集中于：be focused on=be concentrated on2. 句式拓展；简单句变复合句；原句：During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, preventing you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind. 拓展句：During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, which can prevent you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind.
【点评】考查书面表达能力。本书面表达审题准确，观点明确，行文流畅，条理清晰，层次分明，词汇丰富，句式多变，运用了较多的语法结构，例如文章运用了in my opinion、on the one hand...on the other hand等高级词汇； Although you have your reasons, I can't agree with you. 运用了although引导的让步状语从句；... if you feel distressed and empty in your life, handwork is an excellent choice to relax your body and mind. 运用了if引导的条件状语从句； During the process of making the craft, your attention will be fully focused on the activity, preventing you from thinking about the unhappy things in your life and filling your mind. 运用了动名词短语做宾语和现在分词短语做状语等。
4．【答案】The bittersweet moments
How time flies! I'm now in senior year. Looking back on the senior school life, I have high and low moments. However, the bittersweet moments impress me most.
The bittersweet moments are when I finish the homework, when I have a heart-to-heart talk with my close friend, when I'm back home seeing my parents and when I sit through all the exams.
It is through those bittersweet moments that I grow up. And I gradually take a positive attitude toward life.
【知识点】文字式议论文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求考生给学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍高中生活中的不同时刻，并总结经过这些时刻后，对生活的态度或认识。第一步：审题；体裁：夹叙夹议文；时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法；总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：请结合以上材料，给你校英文报写一篇短文，介绍你高中生活中的不同时刻，并总结经过这些时刻后，你对生活的态度或认识。第二步:列提纲，连词成句。根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第三步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：And 2.表转折对比关系：However 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：How time flies!运用了感叹句； Looking back on the senior school life, I have high and low moments. 运用了现在分词作伴随状语；The bittersweet moments are when I finish the homework, when I have a heart-to-heart talk with my close friend, when I'm back home seeing my parents and when I sit through all the exams.运用了表语从句；It is through those bittersweet moments that I grow up. 运用了强调句。
5．【答案】 There is no doubt that we are faced with peer pressure every day. Peer pressure has both advantages and disadvantages, and the key is with what kind of mentality we look at it.
If we are always envious of others famous brand clothes or shoes, we will inevitably have the desire to compare ourselves, which is bad for our personal development. On the contrary, peer pressure which is from studies will motivate us to get good grades For example, when my deskmate got a better grade in the mid-term exam than me, I made up my mind to surpass him in the model exam, As a result, I made full use of time to study hard and spared no effort to prepare for the final exam. As it turned out, I did better in the final exam than him
In word, peer pressure is a normal phenomenon, which we can't avoid. And as long as we face it positively, it will be beneficial to our personal development.
【知识点】文字式议论文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求就来自同伴的压力谈谈自己的体会。第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求就来自同伴的压力谈谈自己的体会：成长道路上难免遇到来自同伴的压力(peer pressure)。同伴压力可能给我们带来积极或消极的影响。请结合自己生活中的一个具体事例, 谈谈你的体会，时态应为一般过去时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； peer pressure（同龄压力），mentality（心态），surpass（超过），beneficial（有益的）， motivate（激励），inevitably（不可避免地）及compare（攀比）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：There is no doubt that we are faced with peer pressure every day. 运用了同位语从句；Peer pressure has both advantages and disadvantages, and the key is with what kind of mentality we look at it.运用了并列句和宾语从句；If we are always envious of others famous brand clothes or shoes, we will inevitably have the desire to compare ourselves, which is bad for our personal development. 运用了条件状语从句和非限制性定语从句；On the contrary, peer pressure which is from studies will motivate us to get good grades .运用了限制性定语从句；For example, when my deskmate got a better grade in the mid-term exam than me, I made up my mind to surpass him in the model exam, 运用了时间状语从句； As it turned out, I did better in the final exam than him运用了非限制性定语从句； In word, peer pressure is a normal phenomenon, which we can't avoid. 运用了非限制性定语从句；And as long as we face it positively, it will be beneficial to our personal development.运用了条件状语从句。
6．【答案】 A left-behind girl Zhong Fangrong applied for a major in archaeology at Peking University with a score of 676, which has been widely discussed by netizens. They suggest she should study computer, finance, artificial intelligence or other majors, which might bring about a better earning journey. However, I strongly support her idea.
On the one hand, archaeology major is her dream. Peking University archaeology major as a key subject in the field has a great influence in the world, praised as "the cradle of Chinese archaeologists" and "the center" of Chinese archaeology research. China has a long history of culture and contains varieties of treasures, especially those previous buried underground. She can use what she has learnt to help protect them. On the other hand, we don't know what might happen in future. The hot major this year is not necessarily the hot major next year, and the cold major this year is not necessarily the cold major next year either. The development of archaeology major still depends on the big situation of the future. So it is unnecessary to worry about it. Good luck to the brave girl!
【知识点】文字式议论文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇开放性作文，要求考生写一篇文章，发表对今年湖南留守女孩钟芳蓉以676分报考北大考古专业的看法并说明理由。第一步：审题，体裁：议论文，人称：第三人称为主，时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法，要求：1.发表看法；2.说明理由；3.表达祝愿。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）left-behind；apply for；archaeology；major；a better earning journey；has a great influence；praised as；varieties of；depend on第三步：连词成句， 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表转折对比关系：not；However；On the one hand,… on the other hand,…2.表并列补充关系：and；either；3.表因果关系：So连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： A left-behind girl Zhong Fangrong applied for a major in archaeology at Peking University with a score of 676, which has been widely discussed by netizens. 运用了非限制性定语从句；They suggest she should study computer, finance, artificial intelligence or other majors, which might bring about a better earning journey. 运用了宾语从句和虚拟语气；She can use what she has learnt to help protect them. 运用了宾语从句；On the other hand, we don't know what might happen in future. 运用了宾语从句；The hot major this year is not necessarily the hot major next year, and the cold major this year is not necessarily the cold major next year either. 运用了并列句；So it is unnecessary to worry about it. 运用了it作形式主语。