Module 12 Help 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语八年级上册考试试卷

Module 12 Help 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语八年级上册
1．在我们的身边时常会发生一些灾害和事故，许多人因此而丧生，所以学会怎样在事故中保护自己非常重要。请根据提示词，以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示词：lift, call, turn, gas, light, cover, jump, calm
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2．书面表达
在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子。请以“A Special Day”为题写一篇英语短文,记叙你特别的一天。
要求：1. 语言流畅、卷面整洁,词数不少于60；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和校名。
A Special Day
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3．请你根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。
1.8月17日（星期六）发生了一次山崩（landslide）；
2.连续两天大雨后，早晨山崩发生；
3.那天有个女孩与她母亲在家，父亲在下午到家，并叫她们赶快离开；
4.雨大，父亲劝告她们带好雨伞；
5.这是房子开始摇晃，她们非常害怕，迅速跑开了；
6.第二天上午回家时，女孩发现房子没有了，到处是玻璃和砖块，女孩感到很悲伤。
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4．昨天晚上一场地震袭击了Susan所在的城市。很幸运，她们全家安然无恙。假如你是Susan，请根据图片描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情况，70词左右。
5．书面表达
61. 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Daniel正在研究中国的节日文化，他通过电子邮件向你咨询有关中国春节的信息，请根据邮件内容，给Daniel写一封回信。
注意：（1）词数：80左右。邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；（2）提示词：set off firecrackers放鞭炮；lucky money红包
6．书面表达
假如你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信想了解你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
家庭安全：小心用火用电，外出时关好门窗；
游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳；
交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。
提示词：electricity 电
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
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Yours,
Wang Wei
7．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
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8．假设你叫张翔，是一名初二学生。你们英语老师让同学们在课堂上准备一个英语演讲，主题是“How to deal with accidents”，请你根据下表内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。
意外事故 处理办法
做饭烫伤手 首先把手放在冷水中10分钟；然后用干净的手巾盖上烫伤处；赶紧去看医生
遇到火灾 用湿手巾捂住口和鼻子，贴近地面，尽快出去； 绝不要回到着火的房子里拿东西； 拨打119，…… 拨打120，……
要求:
1.包含所有给出的信息，可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右开头和结尾已给出.不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
Recently, the fire disaster has been frequently reported on TV. So, our school thinks it is necessary to teach students how to protect themselves in a fire. And here come the methods.
First, we should keep calm. It is very important to keep your head clear. Second, we should cut off the electricity in the house in case we could get hurt by it. Third, we should turn off the gas and lights. Fourth, we should cover our nose with a wet cloth. Fifth, remember not to jump off a window or take the lift. Sixth, we can also call 119 for help. Finally, we should try our best to get out there.
These are our school’s methods. I think these methods are very useful to us.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”写一篇短文，谈谈如何在事故中保护自己。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文。第一段引出主题；第二段写具体的方法和建议，可以使用“First...second...Third...”增加文章的条理性；第三段总结。注意保证语句通顺，行文连贯，主谓一致，文中无单词和短语的错误。
2．A Special Day
I had a very special day when I was a primary school student.
On that day, I went for a picnic with my friends. When we were about to leave after picnic, a farmer stopped us and said, “It's not good to leave so much litter here. You should clean it.” We were ashamed and did it at once. From then on, the farmer’s 'words remind me that I should protect the environment.
I'll never forget such a special day that makes me grow up.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以A Special Day为题目，记叙自己特别的一天。这是一个话题作文，题目中只给出了文章的题目，而具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活，补充文章的内容，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，写作中叙述的这一天应注意突出它的特别，与平时的与众不同，所以选取事例时应注意典型性。短文记叙的是过去的某一天，因此文章应使用一般过去时为主，第一人称来表达，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意内容叙述要完整、有条理，可按时间顺序记叙，并在文后加上自己的感受。其次应注意英语句式的表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以简单句中的主谓宾或主系表结构为基础，穿插并列句，如and, but, so等以及复合句，如状语从句、宾语从句等。长短句结合，提升文章水平。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求记叙了自己生活中比较特别的一天。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章选取的事例有积极性，能体现正能量。叙述清晰、有条理。内容完整，开头点明主题，第二段是主体，叙述了这特殊的一天；最后一段谈论了自己的感受。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段和第二段以叙事为主，主要使用了一般过去时。注意了谓语动词过去式形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式，如had, went, said等。第三段的感受使用了一般现在时和将来时，符合表达的需要。语法规范，语言得体、准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。最后短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如I had a very special day when I was a primary school student.、When we were about to leave after picnic, a farmer stopped us and said, “It's not good to leave so much litter here.、From then on, the farmer’s 'words remind me that I should protect the environment.、I'll never forget such a special day that makes me grow up.等等。
3．例文
There was a landslide on Saturday, 17th August. After two days of heavy rain, the landslide happened in the morning.
A girl was at home with his mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave the flat. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly.
Suddenly the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning, they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. They girl felt very sad.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，根据汉语提示的要点写一篇报道。写作时要包括山崩的时间、地点、过程及危害。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述事件内容；时态采用一般过去时。叙述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且事件发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
4．I'm Susan. An earthquake hit our city last night, I was taking a shower when the earthquake happened at 8:32 p.m. My mother was cooking in the kitchen while my father was watching TV in the living room. My sister Alice was playing computer games. At that time we were very worried and scared. Luckily , no one was hurt.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Susan的身份，根据图片所展示的内容，描述一下昨天晚上发生地震的时候，家里人的活动情况。写作之前，应仔细观察图片，弄清楚图片中的内容，构思文章的主体。通过审题可知，这篇短文描述的是过去一个时间正在发生的动作，因此在短文中应使用过去进行时态和一般过去时态，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。写作时，要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语，以简单句的主谓宾或主系表结构为主，点缀并列句和复合句，提升文章档次，调整文章结构。同时注意语句之间的连接和语言的得体。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，内容充实完整，记叙了地震发生时自己、爸爸、妈妈以及妹妹Alice正在做的事情，同时叙述了自己当时的感受以及地震的结果。短文开头作者先进行了自我介绍，并点明了昨天发生地震这件事；然后用三句话介绍了自己的家人当时正在做的事情；最后用两句话介绍了自己的感受和地震的结果。其次短文中使用了正确的时态，文章以过去时态为主，主要使用了一般过去时态和过去进行时态，动词形式准确，语法规范，符合表达的需要。另外，文章中用到了较好的一些句型，如I was taking a shower when the earthquake happened at 8:32 p.m. My mother was cooking in the kitchen while my father was watching TV in the living room. 两句话中用到了时间状语从句；My sister Alice was playing computer games.中过去进行时态的使用；Luckily , no one was hurt.这句话的开头用了副词Luckily等等。
5．Dear Daniel,
How are you You ask me something about the Spring Festival. And I am very glad to introduce it for you.
Firstly, the reason why we celebrate it is that it is a new beginning of a year, and everything needs to be clean and new to welcome the new year. Secondly, we usually celebrate it on the first day of the year according to the Lunar calendar, and all family members get together and have a big deal. Thirdly, at this day many people will be allowed to set off firecrackers. In addition, during this holiday ,we will visit our relatives and neighbors. Children will get lucky money from their parents or relatives. Finally, the most traditional food is dumpling, which may be different between south and north of China.
I hope my information will help you, which will make me very excited.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，对Daniel的电子邮件中所提问题的回答就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般将来时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
6．Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What’s more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Yours,
Wang Wei
【详解】1. 这是一篇书信，要注意格式。
2. 认真阅读材料不要遗漏要点。
3. 本文时态是一般现在时，人称为第一人称。
4. 写作过程中注意人称和时态保持一致。注意运用连词使语意连贯，具有逻辑性。
7．例文
October 6th, Saturday Fine
There was a terrible car accident happened at 8:10 on Xin Hua Road. That’s because the driver was very careless. When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. When he stopped the car, it was too late. In the accident, the driver hurt badly and was sent to the hospital. Luckily, the two students were a little hurt. They were also sent to the hospital.
The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. I thought we must obey the traffic rules and have to wait for the green traffic light. Especially, for students, we must learn to protect ourselves when we walk on the road. The safety is the most important thing to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要求”中的具体信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、大致情况等。可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据内容要求，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和大致情况；
第二步，说明自己对交通安全的认知以及自己的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①be sent to被送到
②be careful小心；当心
③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则
④wait for等候
[高分句型]
①When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. （there be句型）
②The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. （that引导的宾语从句）
8．例文
Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.
If you burn your hands when you cook, first keep your hands in cold water for ten minutes, and then cover the burn with a clean towel and go to see the doctor quickly. If your building is on fire, you should cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel. Stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible. Never go back into the burning building for anything. Don't try to put out the fire by yourself. Remember to call 119. If anyone is hurt in the fire, you should call 120.
I hope my tips will be of some help to you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿作文。主题是“How to deal with accidents”，根据表格内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第二人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段分别叙述两种意外事故下的处理办法；第三段收尾。语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
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